This just great - a huge improvement on the original (which in itself was stunning)! I hope you keep those chapters coming, old, new, enhanced... Peter/Pattie's journey becomes better with every instalment.
Thank you. I don't know about a huge improvement. Stina Edman's original was wonderful although it always seemed rather cruel. I've tried to make this version a more natural journey for Peter. Hope you like Chapter 13. http://inmyyounger.blogspot.co.uk/2013/08/imyamvd-chapter-13.html
this is amazing. I'd love to see more of this. Wish that was me getting railed like that
Thank you so much. Chapter 13 is now being published. See http://inmyyounger.blogspot.co.uk/2013/08/imyamvd-chapter-13.html