In my younger and more vulnerable days: 2012

Saturday 22 September 2012

Article in Mondi Virtuali

Peter shows his cock cage to Fanciellah for the first time

Attached is a link to Mondi Virtuali that has recently published an article about "In my younger and more vulnerable days".

http://www.mondivirtuali.it/portal/en/content/my-younger-days

I am indebted to Luciana Pinazzo for both the article and her tenacity at seeing this through. Many thanks, Lucy, you're a star.

Monday 3 September 2012

Post-script

And so "In my younger and more vulnerable days" ends with Pattie trapped as a sissy maid under the thrall of her Mistress while her lover was incarcerated in prison.

For those who know the original, I hope you'll find that I've been reasonably faithful to it. However, my adaptation has changed certain aspects. The following are probably the most significant deviations:

I made Peter much more accepting of his feminisation and transition to Patty. This was in order to make his growing respect and ultimately love for Mr.Stern a more natural progression. It also meant that Peter had to grow to love sucking cock and being fucked in the arse. Features of this were:

feeling curiously empty after his first fucking (Chapter 4)
starting to leak pre-cum when being fucked (Chapter 7)
cumming with a vibrating butt plug in his arse (Chapter 8)
not being allowed to touch his willy but finding he could gain satisfaction just from anal stimulation
leaking sissy cream when first fucked by the band(chapter 9)
feeling empty when he hadn't been fucked for a while
feeling a sense of pride that she had been fucked in the office by the boss (Chapter 10)

Letting Peter know that Mr.Stern was also regularly sodomising his mother (Chapter 4)
Having Peter realise that Mr.Stern was both fucking and sodomising his girlfriend, Fanciellah (Chapter 4 and 6)
Having the band humiliate Peter more on their first meeting (Chapter 9)

pissing on him and in his hat
making sure Mr.Stern would be aware that his step-daughter had been fucked by them

Making the office girls aware of Pattie being fucked by Mr.Stern (Chapter 10

letting the office girls and her mother watch
having Pattie happy to be questioned by them

Including another couple (Amanda and her Stallion) at the farm where Fanciellah is being trained as a ponygirl (Chapter 12)

having Pattie realise both that Amanda is a sissy and that she fancies her
having a little pony race between Fancy and the Stallion
making Pattie observe the happiness that willing sissies can enjoy together as Amanda mounts her Stallion when they are leaving. This prepares Pattie for the satisfaction she'll finally receive when Mr.Stern fucks her without her cock cage.

Making Kristina crueler (Chapter 15) both on Pattie and Mr.Stern

having Pattie chemically castrated
fisting, gangbanging and milking Pattie with her girlfriends then showing the humiliated maid to Mr.Stern
framing Mr.Stern for insider trading
arranging to have Mr.Stern sissified in prison
making it clear that Kaiser knew Mr.Stern in prison and was involved in his sissification

In the original, Pattie has been fattened by Kristina and Mr.Stern no longer fancies her and just ignores her. This effectively makes Mr.Stern return to his cruel ways despite earlier showing that he could love Pattie. Whilst the author regularly wrote about sissies suffering and the retribution or control that powerful men or women could exert on them, I didn't think it was satisfactory stopping the story at that point. It was also clear in our correspondence that the artist didn't really want the story to end as it did. Like many readers, I think she found the present ending unsatisfactory since it left Pattie in a form of purgatory.

The author had asked me about the ending of "In my younger and more vulnerable days". I also thought it was terrible that she was close to Mr.Stern but he had now rejected her. She was interested in a sequel. She and I discussed a possible sequel and various plot scenarios. These included:

Mr.Stern is sent to prison for insider trading

Pattie is freed ....

Pattie is rescued by her mother
Pattie is rescued by the band
Pattie is rescued by Mr.Kedis

Sub-plots might have included:

Following her release, Pattie and her mother then rescue Fanciellah

Pattie stays caged with the key held by Fanciellah or her mother
Pattie and Fanciellah live together with Fanciellah freeing Pattie when she wants to be fucked

The band keep Pattie as their secretary
Pattie's mother takes over the running of the Bank
Pattie finds a way of communicating with either her mother, the band, or Mr.Kedis and finds a means of escape. (A sub-sub-plot might have involved a further internment by Mr.Kedis before release by the band.)

Sadly all these are mere speculation unless our favourite artist returns.

S

In my younger and more vulnerable days

Saturday 22 September 2012

Article in Mondi Virtuali

Monday 3 September 2012

Post-script

Tuesday 31 July 2012

IMYAMVD - fully revised Chapter 3 just published

Chapter 4 published (at last)

Monday 30 July 2012

Chapter 9 just published

Sunday 29 July 2012

Chapter 10 just published

Saturday 28 July 2012

Chapter 14- Just Published

Friday 27 July 2012

IMYAMVD - Chapter 15 just published