Apologies for the time this has taken but I have substantially overhauled and rewritten much of Chapter 3. Please let me know what you think of this revised version.
Good improvements, such a dive into Peter's mind. I love the way he's becoming a sissy, I start to hate Fancy, and I'd like to see her humiliated properly. Thank you for the story. Please don't wait too much for chptr 4!
Truly wonderful! We are all so lucky that you have shared this with us. You have improved on perfection.
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Good improvements, such a dive into Peter's mind. I love the way he's becoming a sissy, I start to hate Fancy, and I'd like to see her humiliated properly.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the story. Please don't wait too much for chptr 4!
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Thank you so much. I am sorry about the gap between Chapters 2 and 3 but the revision required a lot of planning, rewriting and editing. S
Deletethis time I did not cum, but the sexual tension was at top level.
ReplyDeleteGood guy Peter, I love to see him sissiyfied.
Thank you. But "good guy"? I'm not so sure.
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good sissy, you're right.
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Can't wait for chapter 4!
ReplyDeleteany progress on chapter 4?
ReplyDeleteWhens the next chapter
ReplyDeleteSorry it took so long to complete Chapter 4. I hope Chapter 5 won't take as long.
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